Monday, May 24, 2010

Don .. Don ... DON!

Have any of you ever visited the original Merlin's Secret Journal?
That blog stunk.

One good thing came out of it. This and this.

I finally finishe that. Unposted of course.

Now, I bring you the EDITED version of .....

The Drake Father!

Chapter One: Lynx Gazing and Murder

Ronan Drake sat in his dorm waiting for his friends, Cassandra GriffinDreamer and Brian DarkGlade. Ronan had called them. It was a emergency. Finally, they appeared through his door. "Finally!" yelled Ronan. " I just got this letter" He read them the letter.
"Dear Ronan, you may not remember me, But I am your long lost father." He paused, for Brian had something to say. But Ronan, I thought you were a orphan!" said Brian. "I am!" He continued. "I had to give you to Cyrus Drake, for he is my broher, and your uncle." Ronan stared. "CYRUS IS MY UNCLE?!?" Ronan screamed. He continued. "But, since of yeserday, I have heard that Cyrus is dead. So, I must start to raise you as my own child. Meet me in Mythtopolis." "What? Where in the Spiral is Mythopolis?" they asked in unision. Ronan stared at his portrait of his portrait of his favorite animal, the Lynx Gazer. And then he remembered something. When he was a small wizard, Cyrus had told him, "The answer to all your questions lye with the Lynx." He reached for the Lynx. But then something Dark and Evil sounding stopped him. "Halt! Ronan! You are under arrest for atempted murdrer!" said the mysterious stranger.

Chapter Two:

Cassandra is Handy

They screamed as the dark figure got closer. But then they realized it was just their friend, Nicholas DeathBlood, pulling a prank on them. "Man, I got you guys good!"said Nick. "Nick, we don't have time for your pranks. said Ronan. "Why not, old buddy?" asked Nick. "Ronan just got this letter, via owl post" said Cassandra. Ronan read Nick the letter. "Mythopolis?" "Cyrus?" "Father?" "Dude, I think your being punked." suggested Nick. "No way, this is way too serious!" yelled Ronan. "We have to tell HeadMaster Ambrose about this" said Brian. "But Prof. Wu and Him went to visit Mooshu!" screamed Ronan. "Mooshu you say?" asked Cassandra. "Yeah, Hametsu village to be infact." Said Ronan. "Well, this is a conoincedence!" I happenen to have some Teleportation Powder in a can." " I was saving it for farming, but this is important." said Cassandra. "Thanks Cassandra, you rock!" said Ronan. Ronan grabbed the can, sprayed it, and soon the dorm was filled with black smoke. 5 seconds later, they were in Mooshu. "I'll look in Jade Palace, Brian, you go look in Shirataki Village. Cassandra and Nick, You go look in the Tree Of Life." ordered Ronan. "WAIT!" THERE THEY ARE!" yelled Nick. They ran for 5 minutes, but then they lost them. "I thought this might happen, so I brought my broomsticks!" said Cassandra. " Cassanda, you on a roll!" Brian said. Cassandra blushed. (^-^ Oh young love XD)They hopped on, and soon they were flying over Mooshu. "Hey! There they are!" said Ronan. They flew lower and lower until they landed in front of them. "Ah, Ronan, I Have been expecting you." said HeadMaster Ambrose.


*Cassandra, that lil' joke was just A JOKE, but it could make this story more interesting, aka like, more err, violence. So, can I put that in it? If not, just say so.

~Ronan Drake Out ^-^


  1. Ahem

    EVIL REVIEWER IN THE HOUSE! (No worries right?)

    It's a bit fast paced, kinda rushed, but besides that, pretty good!


    P.S. Maybe, could you somehow add Amber to the story?